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Kieron · Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 909 Location: Edinburgh

It's not a cover, it's an original composition. It's called the Tale of Three Toothbrushes. I wasn't going to tell anyone. But I crave attention! I know most of you won't comment, cos you won't wanna be nasty, but anyway!

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Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:22 am Post subject:

Héhé Very nice song Kieron, i like it a lot (and i'm not just trying to be nice) i like the melody and i already told you that i love your voice !
Good job my friends, maybe you can post the lyrcis cos i don't understand all of it
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Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:27 am Post subject:

The what "do you sound like" text is funny
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Kieron · Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 909 Location: Edinburgh

Aw, Dav, you're too kind! But fear not -- I shall dearly cherish the compliment!

And I'll get the lyrics up, just as soon as I get home from work.

Cheers!

Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:39 am Post subject:

i'm going to post a couple of original songs i made.
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Kieron · Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 909 Location: Edinburgh

So here's the lyrics!

Once there was a toothbrush // his name was Tim the Tall
And he had a toothbrush friend // named Sammy the Small
And there was a third toothbrush // named Mel the Medium
And they'd all go on adventures // and have lots of fun!

Well Tim was tall, firm and macho // but really he was gay
And Sam was a wee lass // with bristles as soft as hay
But as for Mel he worried // he was neither big nor tiny
So instead he was undergoing // transgender surgery!

Well Tim was tall // Sam was small
But as for Mel // he couldn't tell
For in this society // of a toothbrush glass
Outside the norms he fell

So Sam was the one who really cared // and was always there for the master
Tim was cool, with the master's ask // once a while when he was asked for
But Mel was left and no use to any // he was neither soft nor hard
So to get some love from his Master's mouth // he played the transgender card!

Chorus

“I'll be the tallest girl in the toothbrush pot // and set this bathroom to rights”
“I will be the only transgender toothbrush // and my name will be set in lights”
But Tim and Sam found out Mel's plan // and couldn't contain their laughter
“Do you think just because you are a girl // you'll ever be used by your master?”

But Mel stayed strong and wouldn't sway // he knew what he had to do
So then one Monday he had the op // at just gone half past two
He went back to the pot as a brand new woman // to see if his plan had worked
Tim and Sam laughed and jeered // but Mel – well he just smirked

So along came ten and the master's teeth // and lo! - she went for Mel!
“The change you've made, I'm really impressed // you're so brave to go through this hell!”
Within three days Sam and Tim had gone // to the cupboard where things get forgotten
And while Mel lost two friends her reward was rich // for the master – she was smitten!

Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 6:25 pm Post subject:

The lyrics are great Kieron, that's a very cool song !
Thanks for posting the lyrics Smile

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Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 6:31 pm Post subject:

I've just listened to it while reading the lyrics, that's an awesome song Kieron, i really think it, i love it a lot !
Seems like this part :

So Sam was the one who really cared // and was always there for the master
Tim was cool, with the master's ask // once a while when he was asked for
But Mel was left and no use to any // he was neither soft nor hard
So to get some love from his Master's mouth // he played the transgender card!

isn't in the song....
You're talented amigo ! thanks for sharing this song with us
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Kieron · Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 909 Location: Edinburgh

Oops! Guess I'll need to re-sing it! That was my first take, so I guess I'm allowed one slip-up!

Dav · Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:02 pm Post subject:

there's nothing like a first take imo !
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Dav · Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:14 pm Post subject:

Do you think just because you are a girl // you'll ever be used by your master?
Tim and Sam laughed and jeered // but Mel – well he just smirked
I like the melody in those part
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Kieron · Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 909 Location: Edinburgh

Aww, shucks -- thanks very much, Dav! I wrote the song ages ago, but that bit at the end of each verse has only just come about... Shame you live a thousand miles away, it'd be good to jam! haha!

ema · Joined: 31 Oct 2005 Posts: 1074 Location: france

awwwww it's a pure gem kieron, really!!!!!!! Smile

dav use to listen to it a lot lately, you know i already like your voice very much...and the song, melody and stuff are grand... and now that i read the lyrics....they are also excellent!!!i'm impressed, you're gifted, you have to keep it up, man!!! Wink

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Dav · Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 12:11 pm Post subject: